Shido, You did well on explaining how much seals are killed a year and people kill them and let them rot. One thing you could improve on is staying on topic cause you started talking about a persuasive piece.
One thing i liked is that you didn't have to look down and i can tell you worked on it for a long time and I think you should talk a bit more to the camera because your face was facing down and i couldn't really hear what you were saying.
I liked very much all the information you gave, and I agree with you, animals have the right to live as humans, I also think it is very kind from you part to send a letter to the people that kills the animals, good job!
Shido,
ReplyDeleteYou did well on explaining how much seals are killed a year and people kill them and let them rot.
One thing you could improve on is staying on topic cause you started talking about a persuasive piece.
Rashid,
ReplyDeleteI liked how you explained why we should stop killing seals.
Chaewon
I like your idea😀
ReplyDeleteOne thing i liked is that you didn't have to look down and i can tell you worked on it for a long time and I think you should talk a bit more to the camera because your face was facing down and i couldn't really hear what you were saying.
ReplyDeletei like how you gave a lot of info
ReplyDeleteI liked very much all the information you gave, and I agree with you, animals have the right to live as humans, I also think it is very kind from you part to send a letter to the people that kills the animals, good job!
ReplyDelete- Alexandra
bravo i guess
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